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Wonderful, Corinne! All of it, really, leading to those last four marvelous lines that land the poem with rhythmic alliteration and not a little joy!

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Thank you, Jan! I think this poem originated in either a Team Haag session or Sunday Scribblers...in any event I know you were there. 💜💜

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Awww… how nice! No wonder I like it! Nicely done!

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love your poem!

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Thank you!

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